In short, here are the rules:1. Post the button and link to Jaycee (following would be nice, but not required).
2. Share an excerpt from your current WIP, perhaps something you're struggling with, are stuck on, or just can't "get right."
3. Ask a question about your excerpt. It can be something easy such as "What do you think?" or something more in-depth, such as "Can you suggest a better way to word such-and-such," or "How can I make the emotions in this scene more realistic?"
4. Tag 8 people.
As regular followers of my blog will no doubt know I am frantically editing my teen fantasy, ARROSAY, at the moment. The following is a section that I have been working on recently. It is the opening few paragraphs! So basically, does it draw you in? Do you like it or hate it!?Any help or thoughts gratefully received.
Excerpt removed for editing. Thanks for all your feedback.
Thanks so much for taking time to read it!
And finally to tag eight more people. Sorry guys if you have already had this one.